Mesmerised with those lovely eyes
I follow the graceful gait,
Transferred into a world not real,
Her beauty was a bait.
One smile and my beats go crazy,
Thump thump, I hear them loud,
Ripples of pleasure in my body,
Runs all over like a wild hound.
I live in the neighbourhood, she says
Difficult it is to trust,
But the mind stops working,
When the heart has a lust.
She caresses my arm, And lifts my hand,
Gestures me to walk with her,
My limbs move like a puppet,
She the string holder.
We walk past a few block,
A sharp turn towards the right,
The dark alley indicates,
I am going to get lucky tonight.
At some point where, not a soul is seen,
Just a single ray of light,
She pushes me against a wall,
Her angelic face etched in my mind.
Suddenly I feel the temperature rising,
Her glowing face melting,
To my horror, I see a huge snake,
Wrapped around me hissing.
A shapeshifter in real?
Even before I sink this in,
She winds me a bit more tight,
And, I Feel my bones crushing.
All of a sudden, I see a blinding light,
White it was all around,
In a second it was dark again,
the snake was nowhere to be found.
Till this day I do not know,
If the snake pitied me or God,
But I have learnt my lesson well,
All that glitters is not gold.
this is my take on famous well known proverb. What is yours?
Anything. A haiku, a one liner, jingle or any scribble that comes to your mind.
By-Sweety Pateliya
beautiful flow of words 😀
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Thank you Amar:)
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Reblogged this on Eagle Eye Network.
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This is Just amazing take on the Prompt Sweety.. 😀
Nagin hi thi woh.. 😉
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Icchadhari nagin!!;)
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I saw you voting for my post on Indivine and landed up in your blog and I must say that from the very first stanza I loved this one. Would look forward to read more.
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Thank you. Loved your post too.
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