He lay in pain,
in the pool of blood,
his time was up.
I waited for the right
Time to talk to you,
It just never came.
I worked so hard,
I succeeded, but
They said my time was good.
Day 22 of ultimate blog challenge.
For Haiku Heights.
By-Sweety Pateliya
Chinks' Lounge 
Apt to the word .. simply stunning !!
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You noticed! Thank you.
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I always do 🙂
pleasure as always .. is mine 🙂
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🙂
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Wow 3 of them showing different aspects of life…beautifully done.. 🙂
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Thanks Harsha!
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Success means time was good and failure means I was bad…that’s how the mediocrity has tried to keep itself floating and gloating in false pride..
Lovely haiku…
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html
RS:)
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No one says he/she deserved it. Hard work pays off. Or you need to work harder… Either your time is good, or bad. I hate it!!
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Your haiku’s time has come. Very interesting and well expressed indeed!
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Yes it has indeed. Thank you:))
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Fantastic composition. Stunningly beautiful
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Thank you sir:)
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Oh there are some strong and mixed emotions here. Very good haiku and heartfelt. I loved the second one especially but they were all very good x
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Thank you:)
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These are wonderful!!
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Thank you. Glad that you liked it.
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