Napowrimo#26 The Road Not Taken (The Erasure)

Prompt: Today, I challenge you to perform an erasure of your own. . Go ahead and copy and paste the text into a document, and then start whiting-out words.  You can form a whole new poem just by taking words away! Once you’re done, you can leave the spaces as they are (I rather like the “ghosted” look of all that empty space), or take the left-over words and keep playing with them, reforming new poems from them.
I have chosen the famous The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
 
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim
Because it was grassy and wanted wear,
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,
 
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I marked the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way
I doubted if I should ever come back.
 
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference. 
-Robert Frost
 
Rewritten haiku
Two road diverged in the wood,
Long I stood then took the other,
it was grassy and wanted wear,
I took the road less travelled by
And that has made all the difference.
– Sweety Pateliya
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